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Degrees Do Worse Warped By Fragments

I.
I sit among a contingent of fresh-faced athletes doing mostly
Nothing,

Reading a book on the crosses of cosmogony when I feel a hand
Tapping

On my shoulder. I turn around like a toddler’s wind-up toy and
Find

No face to match the arm suspended in space by something unseen

II.
Faces of clocks abound on every wall I sit across from, next to or
Near;

It makes no sense to me. Half an hour will pass before I have slept
Enough

Hours, and yet exhaustion always accompanies me, even during the
Brief

Rush of excitement I feel when the clocks cease ticking.

III.
Library books are beginning to pile up, most of them long overdue
Sitting

On shelves read less than twice, ones never even cracked open for a
Peek

At their lively entrails, innards I normally would be happy to gorge on.
Bestial

I sit in the dark and wait for hunger to take me somewhere new.

IV.
Game shows are on and I have to buy a vowel to finish the conversation
We

Are having at the dinner table. She is seldom satisfied with anything I
Have

To say. The word can only be “commandeer” but those canaries chirp
Nothing.

I reach across the dinner tray but she has already changed the channel.

V.
Open doors, open windows are bothering me now like a nervous twitch
Tied

Between my lips. The breeze billows in from clouds and ocean sides but I do
Not

Trust it. A car engine coughs emphysemic through the bedroom curtains,
Do

I have a disease now? Someone is tapping on door; I squat and refuse to answer.
:icondarkmoon1987:
This is about degrees and how far a fragment can be warped, just one idea a singular notion can be [combined] placed in new and unique ways. I don't know which is more warped, the degrees indicated by number or the individual fragments connected by paranoia and the [semi]unconscious desire to get away from these disorienting situations.
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Degrees Warped By Fragments by ~darkmoon1987 is a quirky but highly interesting series of fragments. ( Featured by `PoeticWar )
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*DeathOfATragedy Apr 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting concept. :)
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:iconicouldbespock:
Interesting. I like it.
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:iconsynchrochick007:
Mi gusta
I wish I could write as well as you
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:iconclippers0507:
I honestly loved this. So fantastical. Great.
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:iconemerune:
Wow. That was very interesting and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it. Great job. <3
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:iconjzeroseven:
Interestingly Cryptocraptic.

Good work.
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:iconfluffycatgirl:
Wonderful work. I love how it made my mind jump abruptly from image to image, but it all still flows together beautifully. Congrats on the DD!
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:icondrkelement:
~drkelement Jun 1, 2007   Digital Artist
That was a very unique idea you came up with. Nice job holding the form and keeping the expression throughout the poem.
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:icondarkmoon1987:
well, they always come initially in bursts. if i don't finish the poem in one sitting, it won't be finished. these poems are sorta funny, because i have vastly improved my work, at least in my eyes anyway. i now revise religiously, and believe me, the results speak for themselves. now that i have some more readers, i am going to post more poems.
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